4 am, lonely prone
Read. Type. Click.
I don't want to sleep alone.
"New message" shown.
Spam. Hype. Ick.
4 am, lonely prone.
Up, down phone.
Texting, texting, buttons stick--
I don't want to sleep alone.
Neighbor, Neighbor. are you home?
Toss. Turn. Kick.
4 am and lonely prone.
Lonley, lonely dial tone
Facebook status shtick.
I don't want to sleep alone.
Complain. Refrain. Moan.
Clock. Tock. Tick.
4 am--lonely prone--
I don't want to sleep alone.
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2 commentaires:
A villanelle! Nice tick-tock rhythm.
Fix the spelling of lonely in the fifth stanza.
"Lonesome prick. Lonely chick" not so subtle.
I like the other middle lines though, the single words work very well.
fuck yeah! publicity!
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